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December Haiku

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Looking out the window:
          Soft darkness, white snow,
                            And twinkling lights.



Casting a warm glow,
        The old fashioned streetlamp,
                    Makes the snow golden.



The bumps in the snow,
            Cast glittering shadows,
                        By the side of the road.



In front of my house,
          I finally think to look up,
                   And see the glittering stars.



Catching the light,
           The frost on the window,
                    Glitters like a thousand stars.



In the morning,
         I look at the window;
                   Last night's frost is water.



Sunlight bright on snow,
           A few flakes drift along,
                    Through the crisp winter air.



Pieces of ice,
      Reflect the winter sunlight,
                   Blindingly bright.



Late into the night,
     My stitches pull together,
               A Christmas present.



Warm candle light,
       Shines on many precious things,
               Good luck for the new year.



Taken out again,
          No lights or ornaments yet,
                   Our beautiful tree.



Today I observe,
         The return to normal life;
                 A bit of a shame.



The moon,
       So bright in the clear sky,
                    Surrounded by stars.



Locking the door,
          I take a moment to look out,
                   And watch the snow.



Trying to sleep,
        I look at my window;
                Hello again, frost.
I've been writing at least one haiku a day since I decided that I wanted to do so on the 9th of December. It's been really fun, and I think, even if it's not happening very fast, I am definitely improving at writing haiku! More than that, I'm happy that writing haiku makes me stop and really look at the world around me, and appreciate the beautiful things ^^... I'm definitely going to continue writing haiku every day in the new year!

Anyway, a lot of the haiku I've written are really bad ^^;, so I just selected a few decent ones to share on dA. Also, sorry about the formatting being wonky, dA is being a pain about this submission and I can't get it quite right :\...

Oh, and just by the way, I wrote the one that mentions the new year on Solstice, the old pagan new year, for anyone who thought that it didn't make much sense XD...

Anyhow, I love all feedback as always :)

Enjoy my last deviation of 2009 ^^!
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RilMerri's avatar
But the haiku of yours the first sentence is 6 syllables